Watching Francine: A Masturbation Story

Jonathan_Philips · 04-09-08 02:20:30

I sincerely hope that none of you will consider this spamming (if you feel this is unsuitable mods then please delete away), but I wanted to draw anyone who's interested's attention towards a new story I have written and submitted at my website. It is a kind of coming of age tale of a young man watching a beautiful woman bring herself to climax for the very first time.

It was an idea I had for a story many months ago, but because of my membership here, I felt the time was now right for me to set it down in print. It appeals to my natural voyeuristic tendencies as well as my little kink for watching a women masturbate and I think I am rather proud of it.

It is called 'Watching Francine' and I would love to read people's feedback:

http://www.jonathanphilipserotica.com/i … &task=view

All the best

Jonathan

Soberman · 04-09-08 05:39:16

I think it's spamming. You're promoting yourself at the expense of another.

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Jonathan_Philips · 04-09-08 11:36:50

Soberman wrote:

I think it's spamming. You're promoting yourself at the expense of another.

I'm not going to lower the tone of the boards by getting into an argument over this Soberman and will let the mods decide what they think is suitable or not, but in answer to your point:

I am promoting a story I wrote and less directly a website I own, but one that I make absolutely no money out of and one that is free for adults to view. Equally, I do not see how my post is costing ifm so much as a penny.

I notice on these boards that people regularly direct people towards other sites that they might be interested in; is that spamming also?

I really hate to be thought of as a spammer and will gladly allow the site administrators to remove my post if they see fit, but I would hope that they, and most others, might see the harmless nature of it.

Kind regards

Jonathan

blissed · 05-09-08 00:29:56

Cate wrote:

I must admit I find your behaviour completly skeevy. If I found out my partner was doing anything like that without telling me I would consider it completely unacceptable. I don't know anything about your relationship though, your wife might be cool with it, but it just seems like such an invasion of privacy.

The story tends to cover the same ground as smhpgco's thread that Cate was commenting on http://forum.ifeelmyself.com/forum/view … 549#p31549 and I agree with her, but yours is purely a fantasy rather than something you've really done, there are women who fantasize about being watched and most people know the difference between fantasy and reality.

Anyway I'll comment on your story. Everyone knows washing machines are sex toys and au-pairs are only here for sex :) I thought your story wasn't too bad, I like the work of someone who use to write for sonic erotica called Arielle so check out her stuff there. But don't try and get all lyrical or try and do anything but express how you are naturally because you've got a quite unpretentious narrative that is genuinely you and I think that (wether people like your work or not) is the best thing about being creative.

Yeah I give the story 5 :) and you 10 out of 10 for just enjoying yourself and sharing that for free with other people.

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Soberman · 05-09-08 04:20:15

I wasn't arguing. You wrote you hoped no one thought it was spamming. I did.

blissed · 05-09-08 05:50:37

Spammers want money.

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Cate · 05-09-08 07:06:03

While I didn't feel a need to call Jonathan Phillips out for any wrong doing, I do feel that everyone is sufficently aware of his website and that more threads on the topic are not needed.

Jonathan_Philips · 05-09-08 10:38:03

Thanks for your thoughts guys; there will be no more mention of my site.

kypris · 14-09-08 09:58:22

Jonathan_Philips wrote:

It is called 'Watching Francine' and I would love to read people's feedback:

Fiction or reality? –Elyshah's «spin off».

http://nl.ifeelmyself.com/public/main.p … t_id=F1398

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